You’ve again fulfilled the brief. I’m a little concerned that on immediate impression the photographs do not overtly showcase your skills. Follow up on my recommendations below.
Feedback on assignment Demonstration of technical and Visual Skills, Quality of Outcome, Demonstration of Creativity
Notes from, and in addition to, our Skype tutorial :
Reorder the series so that you showcase the most direct images – you are after all ‘advertising’ these dogs – demote no.1
- 10 or 9
- 3 once cropped
- end 7
Think about how they work as a series. The compilation that the blog automatically produces is don’t forget what we see first.
Take control, present your best image first, then make the series tell the story you want it to – this is separate from providing the dogs’ home with the images they require. If there are better images illustrating lighting for the assignment substitute them.
Crop image 1, 2 and 3. Make the series all head and shoulders of dogs. It won’t be a narrow typology as you already have plenty going on in but cropping these three allows us to focus on the expressions – which is of course the selling point.
The backgrounds, especially with reference to 3, detract from this series. They could be useful in talking about the dogs in a different way.
Default references for dogs – Elliott Erwitt, William Wegmann!
Signpost your misgivings about presenting these (to me), versus the positives of the experience of commissioning. You’re doing some great reflection and striking a balance between potentially conflicting factors in making/editing/showing images is always useful.
We discussed how a number of other students used assignment 4 to showcase often dramatic lighting. Make sure you highlight the lighting positives in your submission – balancing the mix of natural and flash, coping with movement, the variables of each scene etc. Also make sure that it is apparent that you garnered a commission here – and that you were also fulfilling the OCA brief.
We discussed how by using animals again you have worked with a further set of variables out of your control – you note that currently this is an area of photography you would like to work in in future.
Learning Logs or Blogs/Critical essays Context
Keep putting your thoughts on books you have read in your blog, and putting reflection into practice. And we do all read Camera Lucida over and over. On Photography still has plenty to merit it – and plenty of people picking fights with it forty years later!
Suggested reading/viewing Context
Keep up with the books! It can’t hurt to read more, seek out Tod Papageorge’s famous quote…
Pointers for the next assignment
Showcase your learning, don’t be afraid to experiment and reference it all!