I was asked by my tutor to re-edit, even though he felt my original posting had met the brief for the assignment. He felt the assignment would be better for the images in colour and he asked me to concentrate the re-edit on colour and then shape. My final edit is below.
I await his written feedback, which will be posted upon receipt. I was told previously to make a series uniform, in regards to the aspect ratio i.e. landscape or portrait, but on this occasion I have been asked to mix them up. Hence my edit below.